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Author Name: Freemeemeep 6 Comments
Date Added: September 12, 2004 15:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Want To Be

I want to be the burning ember
Glowing in your eyes
The inspiration in the smile you
Never can disguise

I want to be the beating pulse that
Pumps throughout your veins
The bucking bronco snorting fire when
You take hold the reins

I want to be the passioned rush of
Loveís adrenaline
The tempting taboo drawing you to
Revel in its sin

I want to be the one to turn to
When your lights go down
The one to come to when youíre wanting
No one else around

I want to be the ray of sunshine
Waking up your day
The sunsetís warm enveloping each
Time it fades away

I want to be the favored pillow
Of your weary head
The warmer blanket you reach for when
Curling up in bed

I want to be your cloaking shadow
When youíve had enough
The shiny beacon guiding you when
Seas are blowing rough

But most of all I want to be the
Thief who stole your heart
The penance for my thievery
With you Iíd never part

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 3, 2005 08:55:28 AM Report
Well...i have only read two of your poems so far, but you have won me over....this one is utterly enchanting and beautiful and shall go on my favorites....as you yourself will also go.
To have someone feel and express what you are so very capable of doing here, truly overwhelms me.
Gushing.....loved it!
~Cindy
Comment By: FreePia Andersson on July 5, 2005 07:45:39 AM Report
An excellent love poem...whispered tenderly to the one you love ..Have a beautiful day, Pia
Comment By: FreeSue Tancheff on September 13, 2004 09:28:26 PM Report
Art

The hopeless romantic in you shone brilliantly throughout this fine piece of writing. I loved it!

Take care........Sue
Comment By: FreeCorina on September 13, 2004 08:48:44 AM Report
Beautiful... like a song. And also nicely metaphorical.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 12, 2004 04:31:16 PM Report
ART,
THIS IS TRUELY A WONDERFUL POEM.. IT FLOWS.. EVERY WORD.. EXCELLENT ~SHE
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 12, 2004 03:21:16 PM Report
Oh wow Art, this is so incredible, you have written this with excellence in every line. Your rhyme and rhythm is right on. =))
I love the feeling I get when I read this, the smooth warm comfort of being loved this deeply. *sigh*

This is will be a favorite of mine for a long time to come. I love it! Splendid write Art!

~Barbara~




 


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