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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: September 05, 2004 08:09:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mousetraps , Spoons , and Illuminations



Among the Mouse traps waits the darkness
combing the mysteries with untamable knots
like a forgotten lover braids her hair
with alien intentions and seductive emanations.
Within my mind their are many mouse traps
waiting in the darkness of my consciousness.
mice of intuition scurry through the star lit
world of my soul.
noses poised and scanning the trellises of existence.
How many flying fish bask in the skies
of my inward landscape.
While silver spoons debate
the finer points of aesthetics
as their florid chrome leaves shake
on their lithe sensitive handles.
While amours lanterns kiss each other
with mandalas in the spaces of their illuminations.

The mouse trap bites the wise toes
of the silver griffin of creativity
as it treads for brighter paths
and the mouse trap bursts
into shards as the griffons eyes
ray-beams of serenity return these snares
back into the dark realm of precognition.
The mice are left to dance in fields
of whispering flowers
as a strange moon
flows through the skies
Fortune catchers sing like crickets
i smile intuitive schemes
for the white castles of imaginations
for comely poems to live within
liquid vision..
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGreg on July 16, 2005 10:58:28 PM Report
Wow. You have such an impressive array of poems. I like this one even more than the last; imagery is just as great, but the content and your expression of it is awesome.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 5, 2004 10:17:42 AM Report
ANDREW,
THIS POEM SAYS A LOT__ALL THE MEANING I DON'T UNDERSTAND.. BUT THIS IS GREAT!! ~SHE




 


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