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Author Name: FreeStrangelove 12 Comments
Date Added: May 16, 2004 16:05:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Stale Kisses"
Secluded in my lonely thoughts of pessimistic dreams
that I see fading away in the dark tunnel that leads to nowhere
Iím no longer content with these basic needs
that used to feed my soul
Now I want so much more from life,
A visual appeal to brighten my worn out soul

I have no energy to even crawl this worthless body out of bed,
but my bed is the only place where I feel safe
So I sleep away the pain
Only now,
Paranoia has crept its way in my dreams 
that are now horrifying nightmares
Insomnia has become my new best friend,
My only friend

3 a.m., 
I drag my tired feet down the cold stairs
hearing nothing but a shrilling cry that is my own
I can no longer hide behind these death-filled tears 
My eyes have cried their last tear
And as I plunge onto the hollow ground,
I have nothing to show but a life filled with fear
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWhitney on February 18, 2005 06:43:59 PM Report
I got chills When i read it~~
~~Whitney

Comment By: FreeWhitney on February 18, 2005 06:40:03 PM Report
I got chills When i read it~~
~~Whitney

Comment By: FreeAlyse on October 30, 2004 02:43:06 AM Report
Isn't that how life goes? A bunch for pessimistic "stale kisses" killing us all away? Lovely poem... the kind you can really relate to. take care.

-Alyse
Comment By: FreeCarolina on August 31, 2004 09:20:23 PM Report
this is a really great poem, you wrote it very well. =]
Comment By: FreeS on August 5, 2004 06:55:55 PM Report
that was written nicely. real nice diction. everyone said wow but i m gunna give this one a WHOA
peace
Comment By: on May 31, 2004 12:00:42 AM Report
I can relate to this I also has many sleepless nights just wanted to say hey thankyou for the two comments. Thanks very much for reading my work. This is a real good title. I liked the line My eyes have cried their last tear. Laura
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 29, 2004 10:40:14 AM Report
Stunningly powerful work, Jenn.

Paranoia has crept its way in my dreams
That are now horrifying nightmares
Insomnia has become my new best friend

There are too many fantastic lines in this poem to mention....but these are so powerful and speak very deeply to me. As someone who has been to the place you are writing about it gives me a strange kind of comfort to know I am not alone.
Our intelligence tells us there are many others but in the dead of night......it.s just us with our demons. Into my favourites for this one!
Comment By: FreeHope Star on May 24, 2004 07:52:09 PM Report
sorry definately wasnt done, I couldn't remember how to spell those late two words so I was trying to hit spell check but it added the comment sorry. back to what I was saying......very vivid another favorite..

Comment By: FreeHope Star on May 24, 2004 07:49:53 PM Report
Another great write, I expecially love the imagery that you use in this one I can feel the late hours, haunting nights, the cold stairs, I c an hear the Shrilling cries. I also like the personification used the paranioa creapping
Comment By: FreeMegan Catherine on May 23, 2004 11:54:43 AM Report
Incredibly sad, but very well written. Good job. =o)
Meg
Comment By: FreeJohn on May 22, 2004 11:26:20 PM Report
Never get tired of the stunning pictures you paint with your words. Awesome. ~John
Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on May 18, 2004 03:18:02 AM Report
Wow! Talk about expressive! It's a terribly sad poem but I enjoy the way you've arranged it. Get's your point across well!




 


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