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Author Name: FreeShortyDog 3 Comments
Date Added: April 18, 2004 15:04:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~WOULD YOU NOTICE ME~
IF WE PASSED EACH OTHER ON THE STREE TODAY… WOULD YOU NOTICE ME? OR HAVE ANY IEDA THAT MY HEART’S BEEN BARED FOR THE WORLD TO SEE? WOULD YOU SEE MY HEART THAT’S THERE RIGHT UPON MY SLEEVE AND JUST CONTINUE WALKING AS IF YOU’VE NOT SEEN ME… THE ONE WHO’S WRITTEN VOLUMES OF SECRET DREAMS And PASSION OF YOU AND ME TOGTHER… OF EVERY SORT And FASHION THE ONE WHO’S MET YOU EVERY NIGHT IN THAT SECRET PLACE AND HAS HELD AND KISSED YOU… IN PASSIONATE EMBRACE DO YOU KNOW THAT IF I COULD AND IT WAS IN MY POWER I’D WANT TO SPEND ONE NIGHT WITH YOU OR EVEN… JUST ONE HOUR IF WE PASSED EACH OTHER ON THE STREE TODAY WOULD YOU NOTICE ME? I REALLY DON’T THINK YOU WOULD… BECAUSE..YOU DON’T KNOW ME.
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This poem is about me and the guy I liek at my high school. I would like that he would notice me. I'm nice to all my friends & family too. WHY HE DONT NOTICE ME AT ALL. why i'm in school. I wish he would notcie me for good. I really like this GUY.
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Comment By: FreeSamantha on April 7, 2011 02:08:33 AM Report


I understand nobody even noticing youre there...Ive been through this....but for me it was everyone who didnt notice me...a guy once pretended not to see me sitting on the floor and sat on my head...I know it sounds funny but it hurt me...Great poem..I hope everything worked out and if not....youll find someone better.


Comment By: FreeTina Steele on December 25, 2007 12:30:15 PM Report
I love this poem.Im in love with my ex and sometimes it seems so obsurd because he proposed to me then took it back.After how he hurt me you'd think Id hate him but I don't.I know how you feel,but be strong it'll get better.
Comment By: FreeRob Sparks on May 28, 2004 08:18:45 PM Report
right on. It can be so frustrating wiating for someone to notice us.Almost as frustrating as it is for others who crave our attention.
Love this poem
rOb




 


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