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Comment By:  Andrew on March 1, 2010 03:30:36 PM |
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i've always thought that hell made more sense as a frigid place, where your only warmth comes from yourself- wonderful job conveying the hopelessness - wish i'd read this earlier - it's clearly an award-winner.
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| Comment By: Steve on April 16, 2008 02:53:57 PM |
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Your poems are always so interesting and rather unique. The imagery is really thought provoking. Congratulations on the award.
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| Comment By: Filthy on October 4, 2007 11:43:33 AM |
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Well writen, and as those below me have said well deserving of the award.
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| Comment By: Paul Peter McLean on January 17, 2007 07:09:40 PM |
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Great work Barbara. Since we don't know what hell is really like (because nobody's come back to tell us) I suppose one theory is as good as another. All we need to know is that it is not a nice place to be. And the scenes you give us are of such a place. Well done. Well worthy of the award.
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| Comment By: oppodeldoc on January 9, 2006 03:41:25 AM |
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Well deserving of the award, I enjoyed reading It! Great Job!
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| Comment By: Karl Berry on May 28, 2005 12:55:45 PM |
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This is really bin a vision of it's own ....very nice ...you are really in touch with the shrouds of misty white................................Patch
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on March 28, 2004 02:36:40 AM |
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Hell of a write,Barbara.How did I skip over this one? It deserves a ribbon or two.Just fine writing,all the way through...len
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| Comment By: Robert Frondle on March 22, 2004 08:14:53 AM |
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i feel i heard this song on a jukebox on a boat ride on the river Styx
bravo
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| Comment By: faedreams on March 20, 2004 07:22:41 PM |
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This is an amazing work, i love it. Congrats :).
~faedreams~
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| Comment By: Joseph Smith on March 20, 2004 03:25:50 PM |
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Thats a long comment list below, no wonder. Its because this poem is so good. Keep up the good work, I think I'll add this to my favorites :)
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| Comment By: joia on March 19, 2004 12:55:34 PM |
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Congratulations - If Hell is our worst nightmare, you have captured mine. Fantastic imagery.
joia
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| Comment By: Mary F. Charest on March 18, 2004 04:59:08 PM |
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Very different and imaginative. Well deserved award.
Mary
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| Comment By: melanie del valle on March 16, 2004 09:47:36 PM |
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excellent poem
meritous of the ribbon that's for sure! Fantastic job and incredible flow !!!
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Comment By:  The Bag Lady on March 16, 2004 01:44:52 PM |
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OOOOOoooooo...CONGRATZ, my friend~!!
All who read this, KNEW it was a Blue Ribbon Poem~!!
....the old bag lady....knowin' good readin' when she sees it~!!
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| Comment By: Victoria on March 15, 2004 07:10:52 PM |
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Chilling! Excellent write!
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| Comment By: Timespell on March 15, 2004 03:58:49 PM |
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Barbara~
How the HELL...Did I miss this poem!!
Your description seems,quiet warming in a strange sort of way!!
Snow angels in hell...LOL
Not that I want to visit it soon,Maybe when it freezes over!!
Congratulations on your award.
:o)
~Timespell~
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| Comment By: Paul Walsh on March 10, 2004 06:06:39 PM |
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"Abandon all hope yea who enter here," Dante describes various regions of hell as fierce cold. Named after the Viking goddess of the underworld, Hella and much like the Greek Tartarus. Great Barbara.
Walshy
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| Comment By: Darkness Rides This Night on March 10, 2004 09:50:56 AM |
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It is the check that keeps us on the right path in this life. An inbreed fear of a place of torment if we cross that moral line of humanity..! A great discription of it..!
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| Comment By: The Bag Lady on March 9, 2004 02:08:20 AM |
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Brrrr-rrr--rrr....You have put us into a chilling landscape, Barb~!
Your magnificent imagination has taken us upon a dark and almost 'enchanting' place....Images abounding~!
Margaret....that old bag lady, walkin' carefully within the Underworld....
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| Comment By: Jason Brown on March 9, 2004 12:53:30 AM |
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Twisted Words,
Forming an excelant Write
Wonderful Job
Jason Brown
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| Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on March 8, 2004 04:42:35 PM |
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Barbara- This comes chillingly close to an essay I wrote
several years ago. I never ceases to amaze me that, no matter what you you do, some has thoughts very similar
to your own. You have captured very eloquently, what I
perceive Hell to be in part. It is interesting what was
actually being pictured to the original Biblical hearers, when a description of Hell was given. What is myterious to us was clear to them. Great Poem! ----Poetrydad----
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| Comment By: WilliamGoldenpen on March 8, 2004 04:56:01 AM |
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This is a very vivid imagining that held this reader from start to finnish. I enjoyed this Barbara.
William.
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| Comment By: Jake R. Parsons on March 8, 2004 12:45:52 AM |
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Interesting idea! You just might have something here! I know that MY hell would definitely be colder than it was hot ;) Love it Barb!
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| Comment By: Ann on March 7, 2004 11:00:00 PM |
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Awesome imagining here. Sounds like a horrible existence. Great write Barbara.
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| Comment By: Keith Overstreet on March 7, 2004 09:53:09 PM |
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A very desciptive write, Barb. A fine view in the window with words. Awesome job, Barb!
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Comment By:  Lady Dragonwyck on March 7, 2004 09:36:38 PM |
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Well, Barbara, this is a very original description of Hell!! I thought the picture of the damned FREEZING was very good!!!
Lady Dragonwyck
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