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Author Name: Freesatishverma 2 Comments
Date Added: February 06, 2013 23:02:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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INVISIBLE PARTICLES
I care less, 
walking on plateau. 
Now, 
mind rejects the peaks. 

A small patch of green, 
I knead on ice 
of firm orbs. 
This sterile landscape starts a fire. 

My hands knit a taciturn probe 
to enter the inconceivable. 

The particles sleep in metaphors 
of a baked sky, 
where the stars bleed every night. 

The fear looms large. 
I sit in the crevices of hurts 
to reduce the dimensions of time.

Satish Verma
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Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on February 7, 2013 11:29:22 AM Report
Wow. it is a powerful and thought creating write. It takes one places they may have not been before. always maggie.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 7, 2013 08:20:05 AM Report

I really liked the ending.  Always enjoy your writes.  

 

Lady D





 


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