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Author Name: Freewhatdoesntkillyoumakesyoustronger 3 Comments
Date Added: April 24, 2012 20:04:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Alone
Who would've thought I'd end up here, the girl all alone,
I had him right in front of me, but now his name's not in my phone.
Each day he'd come back begging, and each day I'd say good bye,
Each day I pushed him away from me; he slowly stopped to try.

I can't believe he's actually gone, I thought he'd always stay,
How could I be so stupid? He finally changed his ways.
He gave me what I wanted, to go be with other guys,
And when I finally came back to him, the truth was in his eyes.

He couldn't wait forever; my immaturity drove him away,
I thought that I could settle down, but I just needed to play.
He was the first guy to truly care, but I was just too blind,
I was too caught up with everyone new..I forgot the boy who waited behind.

All he wanted was to see me smile, so he knew to let me go,
He couldn't make me happy, so here I am; alone.
Every girl told me how lucky I was, but I just couldn't see,
I'm just not the girl to settle down, I need to focus on me.

So now I'm the girl who had it all, and in the blink of an eye,
Had it all taken away from me, and they'll never know why.
But truthfully, I can't be sad, because the path is now so clear,
The past is only far away, while the future is quite near. 


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeNameless on July 10, 2012 06:35:48 PM Report
It's a really sucky feeling huh? most people don't realize what they had until it's gone. I know it's been that way for me in the past. Experienced it from both sides. Nicely written.


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on June 27, 2012 05:12:50 PM Report


If our dreams finally do come true.

What is left in life for us to do.

 an open forum for hearts that has

exposed  many a writers dream.


you deserve another comment.


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 25, 2012 12:35:48 PM Report


The writer is never alone with yesterday words.


Our poems look back while life moves us forward.


nice poem





 


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