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Author Name: Freesatishverma 2 Comments
Date Added: January 15, 2012 20:01:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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MY GOD
it was widening,
the rift, between waves and ocean:
the resilience of depth was going
to challenge the height of winds

on the beach
i stand against the sun
empowered to face a solar eclipse
unreal, something was sinister in the

shape of the house,
the child walks whole life to find
a door, the shock of the rape of a
moon in a prayer room, i drown

in birth of vision,
the hump of knives, in throats and
speech, you want freedom to pack the
dead body of floral tribute of words

Satish Verma
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Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 15, 2012 09:28:19 PM Report
I'm with john .... I'd like to see you put some comments in the author's notes to explain where you are coming from in your poems.  It isn't we are not interested in them, but rather we don't know what the heck you are talking about.  I know poets stretch the imagination, but ...... I for one lose interest after reading so many and not knowing what you are saying.
Gene

Comment By: FreeJohn Armlovich on January 15, 2012 08:12:34 PM Report


you know, I don't quite understand your poems. I like them, don't get me wrong, but I just don't quite understand them. an explanation please? but only if you feel like it,


John





 


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