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Author Name: Freesatishverma 3 Comments
Date Added: February 01, 2011 22:02:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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MORTAL BLUES
That satanic streak 
of tireless undressing 
of a hapless monarch. 

Wings were gone. Cannot fly 
across the tree 
of hypocricy. 

A footmat for the suicidal jump 
from the elegant hierarchy 
to grainy lies. 

Why are you turning ungreen? 
You will dig up the temple 
without god?

Satish Verma
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 2, 2011 08:13:14 PM Report


You are awesome...... Need I say more???

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 2, 2011 09:09:28 AM Report


Satish:  this is very thought-provoking.  I do enjoy your writes.


 


Lady D

Comment By: FreeHollyBeth Bittick on February 1, 2011 10:51:34 PM Report
your word choice is delicious,

This piece is deep.



Love this line. it seems to shout.



"That satanic streak
 


of tireless undressing 


of a hapless monarch."









 


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