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Author Name: ModeratorLadyDragonwyck 9 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2010 15:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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SUMMER HOT !! WINTER COLD!!

Clouds in the sky
     Vanilla cotton candy decorations
       Sky a soft end of summer blue backdrop

   Green grass tops with brown/orange half-shoots
     Birds nests summer lightweight, more leaves for winter
       Blue eyed furry black spiders webs silver

   Doggies fur softer and thicker
      My gray hair grayer and thinner
        Summer HOT!!! Winter COLD!!!

Author's Notes:
Ann's 2 Sept 2010 calendar:  a poem without verbs
 
 I hope I got this one --- IT WAS DIFFICULT !!!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 6, 2010 04:37:14 AM Report
Well you captured the imagery, got the message across and stuck to the rules what more could one ask, a job well done I say~Graham.
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on September 5, 2010 10:45:07 AM Report
Lady D.

A great poem and you did a great job with the calendar, I don't think I could do this one myself.

Tina

Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on September 3, 2010 09:56:31 PM Report
Yes, summer is almost at an end. All the things that lead to fall and winter are there in your poem.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 3, 2010 02:02:49 AM Report
Whew...you are not kidding this is difficult. You've done it though...and the result is lovely! Good job Lady D!

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeSteve on September 2, 2010 09:41:32 PM Report
Nicely written with great imagery.   
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 2, 2010 06:26:45 PM Report
What a nostalgic feel this has. Love it, Lady D. (Your last line makes me think of a Frankenstein movie I saw long ago. "Friend GOOD." ML
Comment By: Premiumcolin skilton on September 2, 2010 05:58:10 PM Report
Well done Lady D

A difficult task but beaitifully mastered.

Well done indeed.

Colinxxx

Comment By: ModeratorAdri on September 2, 2010 03:45:18 PM Report
Wow, great job Lady D!  I will for sure not be able too. You did it perfectly.  Here it is starting to get warmer and warmer, it is spring!
Adri x

Comment By: FreeRobert on September 2, 2010 03:28:13 PM Report
I think you have suceeded well done IMO




 


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