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Author Name: Freedino e 1 Comments
Date Added: June 12, 2010 14:06:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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UNTIL TODAY
UNTIL TODAY

I knew that I could lose you, I told you that I would..
I had no doubt that things would end this way...
I knew you couldn't stay, silently, you walked away 
But I didn't think that I'd lose you today...

The years have gone by quickly, like evening into night,
Our memories lived, then slowly passed away...
I knew you would forget me, leave, and not regret me,
But didn't think that it would come this way...

We used to talk the night away, and early in the morning,
I felt so lost inside the gentle day...
But these things weren't meant to be, you loved someone who wasn't me,
And I've realized that I have lost my way...

Time and distance wrong for us, at least it was for me,
Thoughts inside my mind would dance, and play...
But now it seems, I've lost my will, the talks are even rarer still,
And tears are falling from my eyes today...

Though crying doesn't help just leaves a broken heart,
And clouds my sight, and blurs the things that stay...
Like loneliness, for one who's gone, I didn't see it coming on,
To torture me, like it has done today...

I read your last few words to me, I saw something was there,
Something in the things you had to say...
And I suppose that I could tell, words that held a dear farewell,
But didn't think the words would come today...

Love and friendships come and go, like clouds upon the sky,
To float across your life, then fade away...
Our love was never spoken, but never to be broken,
Something I believed, until today...

I suppose I can get over this, life seems to carry on...
I travel through my world, a world away...
Emotions in me come and go, I rise and fall, with ebb and flow,
I never dreamed I'd cry for you this way...


Until Today......

DEAN EVANS 1 -28-09
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Comment By: FreeMoonStar on June 12, 2010 02:31:06 PM Report
Oh this is so sad, yet beautiful too! You know Dino, words spoken come forth when we are either at our worst or best. But to look inside them is the key. I know many don't. Sometimes I have lost one's friendship/love by doing just that.. But as they say life does go on. memories fade, and so do those that once meant so much in our lives.. But that doesn't mean we should forget it all. For the past is what makes us, the people we meet, we meet for a reason.. At least that's my point of view..

 

Well done my friend. Once again you managed to bring me inside this...

 

Rock on dude!!!

 

Moonie xx





 


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