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Author Name: Freeariesgirl 6 Comments
Date Added: January 17, 2009 11:01:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Stuff your Sorrys in a Sack
Those days are long gone,
There is no romance or wine.
Nor waking up to  dawn,
Nor together to shine.
 
Those days have left.
Leaving me to feel less whole.
Far from petty theft...
It is my heart, you stole!
 
Those days have faded.
The memories more few.
Each breath I feel jaded,
Each tear... Over you.
 
Those days have passed.
No kisses to sleep.
Cold snow in the forecast,
This blizzard is deep.

Those days don't exist,
Just delusions I have made.
Marking you off my list.
It is the right time to upgrade.
 
Those days of self pity,
Have been stuffed in a sack.
You took the girl out of the city.
Now you'll never get her back!
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
fictional.... thanks to the movie
PINEAPPLE EXPRESS for the quote
stuff your sorrys in a sack....
I love that quote!
lol
enjoy!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on June 8, 2009 10:25:06 AM Report
Excellent creative consistent collection of descriptive words conveyed.
In other words
YOU ARE GOOD!
Fletch

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on January 28, 2009 10:27:54 AM Report
Very well written poem Jen. Perfect rhythmn and rhyme scheme!  Henry
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 27, 2009 10:01:50 AM Report


I liked the rhythm and the sentiments
Ali x

Comment By: FreeTina Steele on January 21, 2009 11:05:28 PM Report
wow this is a very powerful piece! good job!

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on January 19, 2009 01:50:49 AM Report
You scared me there for a moment Jan,

 

Whew! Yes, I agree, excellent piece. But should I think otherwise. Your work is always outstanding.. I enjoy all of my reads..

 

Hugs my friend,

Moonie

Comment By: FreeJerome on January 18, 2009 12:49:41 PM Report
Nice poem.
It may be fictional to you but dam, it sure hits me.





 


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