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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 8 Comments
Date Added: January 05, 2009 13:01:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fallen Angel

It is truly an occasion to mourn

Soft and delicate from inception

This little one carried the essence

Sent from heaven with a mission

She traversed on the wings of love

Only to now become a fallen angel

Pity the poor soul who has lost love

For it was only love that kept her aloft

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 15, 2009 06:23:42 PM Report
Losing love is definitely crippling. Even fallen angels rise and soar again. Lovely poem, well done Steve!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeRachel on January 11, 2009 06:40:17 PM Report

"For it was only love that kept her aloft" - I love this, great job.


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 6, 2009 06:38:34 PM Report
Sweet and sad, buddy...Without love, we all fall...len
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 6, 2009 12:28:34 PM Report
sad and poignant

Ali x

Comment By: FreeButterfly on January 5, 2009 10:58:34 PM Report
Well Steve you have done it again...this piece is just wonderful.

~Butterfly~

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on January 5, 2009 09:06:01 PM Report
Steve,
I have to say that this is truly gorgeous. Flawless...
A definite favorite for me--enjoyed, thank you!
~Tracie

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on January 5, 2009 06:58:20 PM Report
A fallen Angel  her trusting wings kept  her in the heavens paradise .. Crippled now and she weeps...
 Just so very heartfelt my dear friend..
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAmy on January 5, 2009 03:26:00 PM Report
Steve

This goes into my faves....one of your best, I think.

~Amy

:o)





 


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