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Author Name: FreeRoger Bacon 11 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2008 19:08:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Flight
Every October
when geese lift
from summer ponds
my world leaves too,
and I am helpless in this.
 
I hold the same V-lines
in the palm of my hand
and someday, I will go too
and be with them.
I am helpless in this.
 
 
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 21, 2011 06:47:23 PM Report
You say all you must to create a marvelous poem however the two short verses seemed abrupt--which takes nothing away from the poem itself but gave me a sense of urgency--which I certainly hope was NOT intentional. Love it! =)



~Barbara D.~


Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on December 8, 2009 08:09:52 PM Report
such a soft and reflective verse.
I liked this very much. ~Pamela
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on January 12, 2009 08:08:54 PM Report
I think we should start qualifying the poet that you are ... great write... love it.... did you read my " last run" I speak of V flights also.... check it out ... Enjoy

Comment By: Freeaaron payne on November 6, 2008 04:07:10 PM Report
This reminds me of the leaves I saw today.  Screaming both in color and in the wind as it blew by.  Nice one. aaron

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 2, 2008 04:52:07 PM Report
Roger, sometimes you take my breath away. ML
Comment By: Freejag on September 30, 2008 08:35:58 PM Report
Impressive words my friend; simple and effective

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 5, 2008 01:28:40 PM Report
Profoundly stated Roger...very poetic...

'ah, 'tis true!

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 29, 2008 04:29:41 PM Report
I know the feeling, Roger...I always get an empty feeling in my gut whenever I see those geese heading south..I like the V-shaped lifeline reference...One thing about life...It seldomly has a happy ending...len
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 28, 2008 09:55:16 AM Report
 Breathtaking work and ever so poignant, Roger.

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on August 25, 2008 08:39:15 PM Report
Rodger...it is a treat to read your writing.  Beautiful! Loved your comparison and the repeat of the last line.

 

Kind regards,

CeeCee

Comment By: PremiumShe Whispers on August 25, 2008 07:26:29 PM Report
I hold the same V-lines

in the palm of my hand

and someday, I will go too

and be with them.

I am helpless in this.

 .. These lines are priceless at first I didn't understand what you meant.. then it hit like a ton of bricks... Your an amazing writer I have grown to respect and admire your poetry thoughts...
 Thank you once again for commiting of my mortal humble poems..   ~ Your friend ~ She Whispers





 


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