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Author Name: Free*just_another_poet* 12 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2008 13:08:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Don't.
Don't try to take my heart,
I want it here with me.
It's a heart made for one
So what you want, we cannot be.

Don't give me your words,
Save them for another one
who will have words just for you;
For your words leave me with none.

Don't give me your heart,
my hands are far too small
to hold the love you offer,
to catch you when you fall.

Don't try to love me,
It's the the one thing that I lack.
Please don't ever love me
'Cause I can't love you back.

Author's Notes:

*Sad Eyes*

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on March 1, 2012 09:24:18 PM Report


Surely someone who feels so deeply and writes with so much honest emotion and true understanding of the human condition is capable of love. Perhaps not in this specific case, but never be afraid to give love a chance when you find the one, nothing is more worth the risk of pain.


 


~*Shell*~

Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on August 21, 2009 03:45:38 PM Report
wow

this was was a great poem to say "no" to someone that you dont really love. i loved the way you wrote this. it was great and had a good flow.

enjoyed reading this

Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 22, 2009 11:55:44 AM Report
Honesty is the word for this poem. Very real and heartfelt feelings. Sad  but true.

Jen

Comment By: PremiumCathy on September 7, 2008 10:49:11 AM Report
This is an exceptional,  honest and very wise poem for someone so young, your heart and mind is of  a very wise person really love reading your work.. Perfect in every word of this
..........Cathy

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 6, 2008 03:46:51 PM Report


I love the honesty in this poem...Its so hard to be so honest at times when someone loves us and we are unable to return it.
Ali x

Comment By: Freejoshua on August 29, 2008 11:23:41 PM Report
i really enojoed this poem we kinda have the same style of writng keep up the great work girlie

~joshua

Comment By: FreeS on August 28, 2008 07:32:45 PM Report
super sweet poem dareeeeeneh

Comment By: FreeSteve on August 28, 2008 10:25:28 AM Report

Your poem seems layered with the written words on the surface and a subtext of emotion running just under it.  I like this very much. 


Comment By: FreeGee on August 26, 2008 07:26:18 AM Report
Great Write from you Dairine....
I love this, simple but very deep meaning behind...

Hugs,
Gee xx

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 26, 2008 04:54:22 AM Report
Is it because you refuse to love again? Nicely written Dairine. Joe
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 25, 2008 10:03:15 PM Report
I liked the title of this. One simple word, and I think it summed up the thoughts within well. Loving someone os a mighty heavy load sometimes, and takes great strength at times too.
Maybe you don't want it now, and maybe you won't ever want that kind of love, but there are many different kinds, and one is sure to find it's way to your heart.
Well said here.
b

Comment By: FreeAndy on August 25, 2008 03:01:50 PM Report
You speak with much love!  Someones heart is their own, but you can hopefully someday have another heart to go along and with your own!

Great write!





 


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