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Comment By: Michelle on March 1, 2012 09:24:18 PM |
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Surely someone who feels so deeply and writes with so much honest emotion and true understanding of the human condition is capable of love. Perhaps not in this specific case, but never be afraid to give love a chance when you find the one, nothing is more worth the risk of pain.
~*Shell*~
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Comment By: Shuberth Dias on August 21, 2009 03:45:38 PM |
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wow
this was was a great poem to say "no" to someone that you dont really love. i loved the way you wrote this. it was great and had a good flow.
enjoyed reading this
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Comment By: Jennifer on April 22, 2009 11:55:44 AM |
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Honesty is the word for this poem. Very real and heartfelt feelings. Sad but true.
Jen
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Comment By: Cathy on September 7, 2008 10:49:11 AM |
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This is an exceptional, honest and very wise poem for someone so young, your heart and mind is of a very wise person really love reading your work.. Perfect in every word of this ..........Cathy
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Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on September 6, 2008 03:46:51 PM |
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I love the honesty in this poem...Its so hard to be so honest at times when someone loves us and we are unable to return it. Ali x
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Comment By: joshua on August 29, 2008 11:23:41 PM |
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i really enojoed this poem we kinda have the same style of writng keep up the great work girlie
~joshua
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Comment By: S on August 28, 2008 07:32:45 PM |
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super sweet poem dareeeeeneh
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Comment By: Steve on August 28, 2008 10:25:28 AM |
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Your poem seems layered with the written words on the surface and a subtext of emotion running just under it. I like this very much.
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Comment By: Gee on August 26, 2008 07:26:18 AM |
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Great Write from you Dairine.... I love this, simple but very deep meaning behind...
Hugs, Gee xx
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Comment By: Joe McNinney on August 26, 2008 04:54:22 AM |
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Is it because you refuse to love again? Nicely written Dairine. Joe
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Comment By: b doneff on August 25, 2008 10:03:15 PM |
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I liked the title of this. One simple word, and I think it summed up the thoughts within well. Loving someone os a mighty heavy load sometimes, and takes great strength at times too. Maybe you don't want it now, and maybe you won't ever want that kind of love, but there are many different kinds, and one is sure to find it's way to your heart. Well said here. b
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Comment By: Andy on August 25, 2008 03:01:50 PM |
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You speak with much love! Someones heart is their own, but you can hopefully someday have another heart to go along and with your own!
Great write!
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