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Author Name: FreeaRomnceHasFallen 4 Comments
Date Added: July 25, 2008 05:07:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Rebirth of Perception

Into this world I'm thrown

Venture into the unknown

This electric dream it seems

is all too real

Unaware of the pain

Driving me insane

Falling at the seams

I hate to feel

So keep me sane

Keep this life mundane

Drown all the light

Steal the sun from the sky

Fill me with your cure

White coats seem so sure

Keep me in this fight

But cease wondering why

Drown me with your subliminal direction

Give me misguided sense of reality

I'll pay for the electric protection

Subterfuge in the form of piety

Destroy the predecessor's stomping grounds

Satisfy your impetuous want and greed

Pierce the able body with a few more rounds

As you sow the ignorance seeds

So I'll be right here

Keeping the conscious wave clear

But few will see

Few will act

I will never feel the need

To bow to corporate greed

I know I can be

What others lack

Tilt that level head

Shoot perception dead

Like a phoenix I will rise

Hearing their conscience cries

I'll sit back and laugh

At how they fell into the trap

And stand forever on guard

Forever on alert

The war is on

 A struggle for truth

That will never be won...

Author's Notes:
About a guy who's beeing bullshitted by the typical american platitudes and well, bullshit.
 
He wakes up and becomes one of the few freethinkers in this failing society.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freenoah count on July 25, 2008 09:40:32 AM Report

I share your fatalism, however within the muck there are gems of bliss, good luck prospecting.  Your poem is powerful and honest.  Nice job.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 25, 2008 08:31:18 AM Report
John,
 First of all Welcome to our site!! Second.. this is a very well written poem ...I enjoyed the reading...
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 25, 2008 07:52:20 AM Report
I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem Excellent job
.......Cathy

Comment By: FreeNichole on July 25, 2008 05:31:33 AM Report
*raises fist for freethinkers* It's sad to think that 99% of society would rather have their free will taken away and allow themselves to be spoon fed all the bullshit. I like your poems so far :D

~Nichole~





 


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