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Author Name: PremiumDream Hearted Poet 2 Comments
Date Added: July 22, 2008 16:07:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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last forever
don't break down
sometimes love can bring
trouble water over a bridge
so make this love last forever
and you will always love each other.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 2, 2008 01:22:17 PM Report
Beautiful words of comforting embrace you leave the reader...Love is so strange...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeChris B on July 22, 2008 04:11:29 PM Report
The use of the second person in this poem adds such an interesting concept to this. It's full of advice but carries a strange sense of insecurity; the first person hopeful and an idealist...working so hard to keep this love together. A very fine write.




 


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