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Author Name: Adminrich53 16 Comments
Date Added: March 25, 2007 01:03:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Captured

 
I feel her touch,
As nimble fingers brush,
Against keys of this cage.
Within, impulses rush.
 
She seems to peer inside,
A little gleam in her eyes,
As if asking why I'm here,
And what within my soul still hides.
 
Expended are all my tongues.
Lost, even the most noble one.
Only a low moan remains,
Welling up inside this prison.
 
Her scent, unforgetable now,
Like the soft wetness of her mouth,
The hot sensation of her touch,
That creamy smoothness of her skin.
 
Locked behind these cold walls,
By forces hardly known at all.
I find answers for others,
Knowing my own fate so well.
 
Alone, painted in shadows and grey,
The creature stirs and paces by day.
Testing the bars by night,
Longing to devour the keeper.
 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichael Salyers on September 1, 2010 01:50:01 PM Report
Great write! Reminds me of the beast I sometimes write of sauntering about in times of great sorrow. The imagery is very clear and just too relatable to not feel a connection to....

Michael

Comment By: FreeLeila on April 13, 2010 11:06:26 PM Report
Hello,

What live atmosphere you have created in the poem. I wish that bird could fly.

Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on July 17, 2009 01:35:39 PM Report
this is good, i liked this ! :)

 

 

Shuberth

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on March 18, 2009 12:03:58 PM Report
Respected sir!. This wonderful poem reveals the depth of your love and loyal feelings to someone special... Both imagination and rythm are noteworthy indeed.... Congratulations dear sir!
Comment By: FreeButterfly on December 20, 2008 09:35:44 PM Report
This is a wonderful poem, I feel the passion flowing from this..I truly enjoyed.

 

~Butterfly~

 

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on November 11, 2008 02:05:20 PM Report
This one is fantastic Richard...glad I read it.. rhymes..balance...meaning..great piece ..Love it..



Comment By: FreeDavid on June 25, 2008 06:54:08 PM Report
Great poem, each line leaves you wanting a little more and it has some mystery to it, it seems.

David

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 20, 2008 10:23:41 PM Report
Longing to devour the keeper....I LIKE that ending line, Richard. Powerful feelings, sensual and otherwise in this fine write.. Speaking of writes, we haven't seen one from you in awhile. As you know by now, having nothing to say has never kept me from saying it. What makes you any better?....:o)...len
Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on April 24, 2007 12:15:58 AM Report
who says scientists can't be poets. Not I. Wonderfully done.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 8, 2007 11:46:15 PM Report
Wowowow...this is truly brilliant. I love this poem in its entirety Rich but the ending was especially marvelous! This one will be a favorite of mine...for sure!! =))

 

~Barbara~ *letting the poem embrace her*

Comment By: FreeGlata on March 30, 2007 12:41:42 PM Report
A wonderful steamy write! Good to see this here, Rich...Very sensual writing!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 29, 2007 11:22:28 PM Report
WOW! Passionate, but tender, Steamy but sensual! Very nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 27, 2007 01:28:00 AM Report
OMG! Hot and sensuous and first thing in the morning here! Phew

 

Ali x

Comment By: PremiumAnn on March 25, 2007 04:37:30 PM Report
Great use of words to give us images of emotion. Nicely done.

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on March 25, 2007 01:55:10 PM Report
Imprisoned, by but Love, can bring one to only their knees in hoping for just one glance, just one touch....
Rich.....This is quite intense, bringing the reader to feel the emotions that are truly trapped in your soul....
Great visuals and sensations.....
I thought it was smooth, and the read was intriguing.....
Loved it....

Margaret.....the old bag lady, who has been mesmerized by a few...(smile)

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 25, 2007 04:23:12 AM Report
Excellent work Rich especially liked the last two stanzas, but should'nt "devoir" read "devour".




 


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