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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2006 23:11:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Surface Of Our Skin
For words are tender
when they cannot
be traced back
across the whiteness of page.
for with the magic
of speaking is when
we are lead across the tracks
when a kiss like a passing train
spells the surface of our skin.
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Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 14, 2006 03:36:02 AM Report
~Andrew
Simple words escape through my fingertips when inside myself I am 
 speaking volumes...

This write was chock full of beautiful surprises..the audio was a very nice touch!...Enjoyed so much, thank you! :)
(*Moon~

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on November 12, 2006 06:34:36 PM Report
Words to make a sigh escape the cleft soul...

Wonderfully alive Andrew...you breathe life into these poignant words with the life of your vibration.  It's beautiful~

Hugs,
Little Fox~

Comment By: FreeHeike on November 12, 2006 05:27:54 PM Report
Living in the moment can be so rewarding... a lovely piece.
Enjoyed the audio, too - you maintained the balance between intensity and aloofness (if that makes sense).
~Heike
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 12, 2006 09:48:36 AM Report
when a kiss like a passing train

spells the surface of our skin.

as always I love your poems.. there just beautiful my dear friend..hugs ~ She Whispers




 


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