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Author Name: Adminrich53 18 Comments
Date Added: September 18, 2006 04:09:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Reach and Touch a Star
 
 
 
 
 
Reach and touch a star,
On this cloudless night.
Peaceful, crystalline,
Such a magnificent sight.
 
Observe the shining sea,
Each star so bright,
Shimmering delicately.
An individual delight.
 
Boldy, I follow one,
So beautiful tonight.
A special pure, deep blue.
I gather in her light.
 
Bring on magnification,
It reveals no more detail.
Gently bend her rays.
Tools are to no avail.
 
I turn my thoughts to you.
A clearer view, desirable.
Yet, to this mere mortal,
Equally unobtainable.
 
Enigma of my universe,
You're certain to remain.
As you transit the heavens,
My love shall never wane.
 
 
 

 

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Comment By: FreeValerie Dohren on August 3, 2014 06:46:04 AM Report

Beautiful poem - the stars are always a great source of inspiration.  

Val

Comment By: FreeTimespell on March 30, 2013 10:58:57 PM Report

nICE sTAR...

 

 

always.... keep it close, never let it go....

never let go...

 

Who's the keeper of your eyes

who's the speaker from the skies

my heart keeps lifting me so high high high high

Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful

Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,Beautiful,

 

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on August 1, 2010 12:22:14 PM Report
Rich 

A beautiful poem.  The heaven's are full of mystery and beauty.  Wouldn't it be lovely to dance among the stars between Jupiter and Mars.

Tina

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on August 3, 2009 01:45:19 PM Report
You have successfully pointed out towards the sublime thoughtfullness, kind sir!!.... I am really moved!

Regards

Mujtaba

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 4, 2008 10:58:40 PM Report
This gave me warm fuzzies. I grew up in Houston near Nasa. My mom worked there during the Apollo missions. This poem took me back to my backyard where my brother would explain all the constellations and talk of all the planets we (man) would explore. 40 yrs later and we haven't gone much further but I never tire of looking up at the stars. Your poem captures the mystery and romance of all that twinkles above us.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 25, 2007 08:51:01 AM Report
wow, exceptional write, keep reaching for that star,

Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on December 27, 2006 02:41:24 PM Report
Richard, your writing never ceases to amaze me..I love watching the stars...they r the past, the present and the future.

Love Gay




Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on November 21, 2006 08:44:15 AM Report
~B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L~     I love watching the stars at night, the view is never the same. Lovely visions placed so gently within the readers heart. Thanks for sharing.

~Penny/Vizualensemble~

Comment By: FreeAngel on November 13, 2006 10:43:42 AM Report
Beautiful write so romantic and gentle. I do love watching the moon and stars in the sky 

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 8, 2006 01:58:12 PM Report
Oh Gosh Rich.....this is you...this is why I always love your writing. I love the star, moon and sky..then mix it with romance....I just melt.Utterly tender, devoted and beautiful, with a hint of sadness. <sighs>

~Cindy

 

*fave*

Comment By: PremiumCliffton Clay Cromberg on November 5, 2006 02:40:21 PM Report
Rich, Our spirits are part of this enigma that we all share an earthly kin! We all were born into this universal rhyme! Your imagery, Wonderful!  The stars are like love, there are fleeting moments when we've reached out and gathered the beauty of it's light, and other times when we've reached for something unobtainable. Beautiful write!!

                                      Sincerely, Clay TheWolf...

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 11, 2006 09:09:00 AM Report
Nice poem...I like it...:O)
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 26, 2006 04:25:20 PM Report

Now this is just terrific Rich, very romantic and tender. While you are reaching for that star, extend just a little further for her! Joe


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 22, 2006 02:23:04 AM Report
From one mere mortal to another let me say this... if you love her this deeply reach out for her...perhaps the unobtainable can be obtainable. What do you have to lose?


This is lovely but the acceptance of the situation as it is ruffled me a bit. (as my comment above shows) Boldy you follow her...that is great...now boldy make your move.

~Barbara~ *giving advice that wasn't asked for but hoping you won't mind*

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on September 19, 2006 07:47:34 PM Report
I love the line "Enigma of my universe" just smashing, bloody smashing thats what it is!
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 19, 2006 09:46:02 AM Report
Beautiful work, Rich...and sometimes I can so absolutely agree...Love is as unobtainable as the stars!

Keep reaching out, hon...you'll reach that star one day and she'll shine brightly just for you.

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: PremiumAnn on September 18, 2006 06:20:11 AM Report
Nicely done Rich. Calm and peaceful with just enough wonder to make the mind think a bit.


Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 18, 2006 04:41:34 AM Report
Well Rich I guess stars are all about reflection, lost love,mystery and affection and they will still be there long after our demise, but of course memories may last forever for some of us.nice write.




 


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