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Author Name: Free*just_another_poet* 7 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2006 18:09:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tears
One tear, two tears
Three tears, four
Tears are flooding
more and more

Fifth tear, sixth tear
Now that's seven
Please, God, take me
now to Heaven

I can't stay here
Can't survive
I need you
To keep me alive

Why can't you come
and hear my cries
Why don't you stay
to dry my eyes

I need you
Like nicotine
Show me things
I've never seen

You never come
When I call your name
I'm all alone
When I'm in pain

I need you
But you're never here
98, 99
100 tears. . .

Author's Notes:
Can't stop crying. . . .:(

this is weak but oh well....x x x x x
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on August 21, 2009 03:49:16 PM Report
another great write and i can relate to this. i loved it sooooooo much and i'm gonna add this as my fav poems. it was so sad but so great poem.

 

keep up the good work

 

 

Shuberth

Comment By: FreeSavannah on October 17, 2006 11:37:48 AM Report
that is soo great i love it!!!

 

~*!Savannah!*~

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 29, 2006 07:21:28 AM Report
agony of soul and total despondancy well displayed.

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on September 27, 2006 05:05:26 PM Report
Not weak to me, it's very touching and heartfelt...

As a guy I've been programed to not cry, it's been made out to be a sign of weakness.

However it's not that, it's a sign of strong emotion just trying to get out...

Deeply intense and moving...

Comment By: FreeS on September 12, 2006 07:20:59 PM Report
nice poem, shows a lot of heart
Comment By: FreeNicholas Ryan on September 12, 2006 11:49:43 AM Report
Oh, wow please stop crying.

Why are you crying??

 

Please read my newest poem.

 

later nick.

 

I hope you feel better

Comment By: FreeRobin on September 11, 2006 07:02:16 PM Report
weak...no. amazing - YES! i like this and in a way...i know how your feeling. good job <3




 


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