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Comment By:  Michelle on March 23, 2009 07:50:09 PM |
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The Haiku is one of my most favorite poems, and you have written such a beautiful one :) Thanks for sharing!
~*Michelle*~
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| Comment By: Candice on May 16, 2007 12:10:17 PM |
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A beautiful haiku....I really like this one |
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| Comment By: N.M.Sodergran on May 12, 2006 02:09:23 PM |
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Beautiful imargery in this Haiku :) You mastered the style well with the seasonal pointer and the leap of perspective in the end. Excellent! Cheers!
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| Comment By: Cynthia Jones on January 21, 2006 12:02:12 AM |
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Such a beautifully penned Haiku sis. Have missed you lots. Love ya. ~HUGS~ *S* Wind Whisperer
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Comment By:  Roger Bacon on January 13, 2006 07:18:22 PM |
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I like this because there are almost underlying thoughts here.
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| Comment By: Glata on January 9, 2006 08:28:44 AM |
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I love roses...beautiful sweet scent and lovely silken petals. This is great!
Hugs, sis!
Glata
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| Comment By: The Bag Lady on January 5, 2006 05:34:50 PM |
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A pleasant and fragrant haiku, Sunshine~!!
It is good to see you writing again, and I will try and catch up on your word banks someday...(sigh)...
Margaret.../Starlight a friend....
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| Comment By: Damon D. Brewer on January 2, 2006 11:58:29 PM |
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I like your poem Jillian, and you are right. However, the weather in Arkansas has been so warm that our roses bloomed again this year in October and November.
Damon
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| Comment By: Phoenix on January 1, 2006 10:31:03 PM |
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OoOoOoH!
Roses are such cool flower's, they have the ability to make a yard look instantly better.
Awesome Haiku!
~Phoenix
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| Comment By: Joe McNinney on January 1, 2006 02:09:14 PM |
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This sounds like me actually! LOL! Beautifully done Jillian, Joe
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| Comment By: Michael on January 1, 2006 12:43:27 PM |
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Again, I think it is a stronger Haiku if the first and third lines are reversed. Michael
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| Comment By: She Whispers on January 1, 2006 10:56:09 AM |
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BEAUTIFUL ROSES WITH FLORAL SCENT
YOU PRETTY LADY
YOUR POEMS ARE HEAVEN SENT
LOVE YA!!"HAPPY NEW YEAR" ~ SHE
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| Comment By: b doneff on January 1, 2006 08:56:11 AM |
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Ahhh, and they smellll soooo good! It is so nice to see you! This made me wish for my gardens, and spring...sighhhhh. Barbie
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