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Author Name: Adminrich53 13 Comments
Date Added: September 14, 2005 00:09:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fall Leaves

 
 
 
 


 




Fall leaves' crimson blaze,

Hued in highlights of her hair,
 
Spark fires in me.

 

 


 

Author's Notes:

A humble first attempt at Haiku. Revised 09/19/05. Apologies!

"Haiku" courtesy of Ryan Bliss - www.digitalblasphemy.com

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on May 29, 2007 12:46:36 AM Report
ah, beautiful! And I love haikus :)
Comment By: FreeCandice on May 16, 2007 04:52:14 PM Report





nice haiku. fall is beautiful season.


Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on February 4, 2007 01:14:30 AM Report
Now there's a man with a passion for autumn!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 29, 2006 12:11:59 AM Report

This is one Haiku that doesn't have a single wasted word. Very, very nice! =))


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on July 15, 2006 10:23:18 AM Report
Hahahahaha... Great Rich, the sound does bring a different texture to the piece...
Comment By: FreeWhiteOwl on October 18, 2005 09:05:44 PM Report
Very nice!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 16, 2005 10:52:30 PM Report
Hey...You got the right amount of silly bulls and everything. THis is much better than most haikus I've read..The beauty of Fall, and an expression of passion, in very few lines..Here's one of mine, Rich..

Your nut in a vice
May cause your face to contort
As the pecan cracks...len
Comment By: FreeRyan on October 15, 2005 07:49:48 PM Report
Ah another late comment! well better then none i suppose :)
For your first Haiku it was very beautiful, To be honest i don't have any Haikus soon i hope i will =)
A great Haiku reminded me of a Japanese warlord poem i read

~Ryan~
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on October 7, 2005 02:13:07 PM Report
This is very nice.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on October 5, 2005 03:15:41 PM Report
You never know what those little leaves will inspire. Nice haiku Richard.
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on September 25, 2005 09:26:53 PM Report
Nicely penned Rich. I can't seem to see the pic though. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on September 14, 2005 07:02:11 AM Report
Very nice poem. I like the picture too.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 14, 2005 02:27:13 AM Report
Beautifully said, Richard, and presented with the lovely leaf pic~ This is a new Haiku count for me~ I will have to investigate....Loved it~!
Margaret...the bag lady




 


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