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Author Name: Adminrich53 11 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2005 21:07:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I'm Missing You So Much

There... There it is again.
A message so, so rare...
Instant, deep emptiness inside,
Why, I ask myself, why?

Seems you are so happy...
That knowledge brings me joy,
I look for words to support your choice,
And draw less attention to me.

The answer clear my friend,
I'm missing you so much.

Words... Words help no more.
They only say I love you so.
Only you know what you need,
I must relax and let you be.

Earlier, your silence said more,
Than I know you could bear to say.
What's on my mind fades in relevance,
Yet I can't cut this last lifeline.

So you know my friend,
I'm missing you so much.

Tonight, I sit here in my grief,
Reading between your strokes.
And your words, I seek some trace,
Of any feeling from before.

The values you write about,
Say you're just the same...
The sweet soul I once met,
I can't see you've changed.

No matter what I say,
I'm missing you so much.

I'll always long to see you,
I wanted so much for us.
It hurts to know I always will,
But won't be there to tell you so.

Each day, I miss that feeling,
Of being won over so completely,
That nothing else mattered.
Now everything else I dread.

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on May 5, 2006 09:55:18 PM Report
Makes ones heart sad to read this, Rich. So emotionally charged with sadness. I know the depth of this sorrow too.
Very tender piece, Sir.
Keith
Comment By: FreeRachel on January 16, 2006 07:06:24 PM Report
Your emotion is so clear, and your heart is so exposed in this poem. I, having just gone through a breakup, can relate to what you are saying - of trying to be happy for the other person and being saddened by the fact that you can no longer tell them how you feel. Excellent job, Richard! Keep on fighting the good fight!
~Rachel
Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 19, 2005 08:11:57 AM Report
Fantastic write.
Lubs
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 29, 2005 10:59:19 PM Report
Strongly hints of the melancholy I seem to know so well. As always, beautifully written and expressed. ~ Cindy
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 25, 2005 01:05:24 AM Report
Emotionally packed...the reader feels the heartache in every line.

These are tender thoughts...strongly stated. Very good work!

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeShawnta on August 13, 2005 08:58:17 PM Report
tough luck but that was a good write
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 29, 2005 10:17:42 AM Report
heartfelt and well written.
Alison Sw
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 27, 2005 09:01:06 AM Report
RICH,AS I READ THIS I FEEL YOUR PAIN I KNOW YOU STILL LOVE THIS LADY __WISH I COULD JUST HOLD YOUR PAIN AWAY MY FRIEND.. I FEEL THE TEARS IN YOUR HEART!! HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 27, 2005 08:51:22 AM Report
Rich...this is sadly beautiful! my heart aches after reading it, seeing your heart and soul poured into these words. Your lines about silence saying more than words ever could...How well I know this feeling!
Well spoken, my friend, and you always have a friend in me, if you need to vent.
Many hugs to you!
Glata
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on July 26, 2005 11:45:12 PM Report
So full of emotion. Made me feel you we talking to me.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 26, 2005 09:47:00 PM Report
Ohhh Rich, this just dripped with emotion, right straight off the desk and onto the floor. That last verse just tears it..this was phenominal Rich. Your words never disappoint me. Thank you for sharing again. Barbie




 


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