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Date Added: July 17, 2005 20:07:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Linger And Watch Your Face



The essence of deep shadow I seem
Tonight shifting silently within this realm.
Drifting through thorny bushes and tips of trees
I can hear moonlight's effect on nearby leaves.
 
Ignoring the playful hunt of a lone black cat
And the quiet whisper of the wind
I sense familiar soft song and steps nearby
Long has been the search, is this the time?
 
Drifting closer in anticipation
It IS you that I find dancing there.
Within this favorite clearing your return
Cast so deep in shadowy wood.
 
Bathing within this clear full-moon night
Surrounded by your softly glowing aura.
Clothed merely in the glistening dew
So vulnerable are you, I fear.
 
Excited and spun by the perfection,
Adagio your graceful pirouette,
The dew only tenuously maintains it's grip
On your soft pale skin.
 
Closer.... I must be to you...... I must,  
You perceive so much more than shadow.
Closer, ever more near I stand
Finally, I gently offer you my hand.
 
Accepting the humble gesture,
Entwining our arms together.
As you smile longingly
Continuing your sensual dance.
 
As the evening wears on
I surround you 'til we are one.
Replacing the moon's cold stare
With the snug earthy warm of night.
 
Embracing the fullness of your skin
We exchange the mysteries of the night.
Then holding you softly as you rest
In twilight unwillingly I look from your eyes.
 
The darkness or light no effect on your beauty
Tide or full moon change not your countenance.
Unlike you I am bound to these things
For none could take my place if I stayed.
 
To the westward wind I say my wish
That someday I'll again encounter you here.
My leave I know I must quickly take
My powers at risk as I linger and watch your face.


 

Author's Notes:

A humble sequel to Dancing in the Dark, by the Sensual Sorceress.

That is such an inspiring poem, Jody!

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 2, 2006 09:05:59 PM Report
THIS IS INDEED BEAUTIFUL.. THE LOVELY DARK LADY IS A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN WITH A GENTLE ROMANTIC HEART.. THIS IS OUTSTANDING.. ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeJessica on August 7, 2005 12:03:30 AM Report
Divine !
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on July 24, 2005 09:33:34 PM Report
Rich! Am I going to have to hose you two down? LOL To say you steamed up the forrest is to do an injustice to this spiritual, sensual dance in the moonlight. It takes my breath away and Jody will be unbearable now since she inspired this! I think it has to get in my fav bucket... beautiful work. Jude
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on July 21, 2005 08:13:02 PM Report
Isn't..? Oh my goodness this is a fitting follow up. Excellently done my friend..!
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 19, 2005 10:52:50 AM Report
Rich! This is beautiful! You certainly got a wonderful inspiration from our own Jody...and seems she got the perspiration thingy down pat, too, lol!
Seriously, though...this is outstanding! You've shown such beautiful talent here...
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on July 18, 2005 09:10:19 PM Report
Far from humble....this is a sensual sequel indeed.
What a great way to be inspired Rich.....
I think you really are a talented writer.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 18, 2005 08:51:34 PM Report
WooooooooooooW this is incredible so amazing your imagery let us dance with you as we enjoyed the wonders of this Excellent poem You are surely talented and gifted
excellent
Cathy
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on July 18, 2005 12:47:58 AM Report
I knew from the first word that it was in response to Jody's beautiful write. She doesn;t know it but she is my favorite poettess here. shhhhhhh don't tell her. LOL
Beautiful write
Gentle Dove
Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 17, 2005 09:40:02 PM Report
Ohhhhhhhh Myyyyyyy Gooodness Rich..what an sense awareness this raises..makes the head swim and heart pound..barbie




 


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