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Author Name: Adminrich53 5 Comments
Date Added: April 29, 2005 15:04:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tick Tock

Tick tock.
Click clack.
Heart like a pendulum,
Life a train track.

At rest, faster, fastest.
Slow, slower, then stop!
Fall in love, smash your heart, assess,
And repeat therafter till you drop.

Like a pendulum a heart sways,
While standing on life's train.
How many cycles before,
You see who you really are?

The scenery changes,
Your love ebbs and flows.
You know the cycle,
Can't stand when it's slow.

By this age you should know,
What your heart needs to grow,
But timing is everything,
And back you can't go.

Tick tock two pendula now.
Two trains moving quickly.
Their beginnings unclear.
Destination unknown.

But with conditions just right,
They swing in phase for a while.
Synchronously, together,
And then suddenly not.

A slight difference in energy,
Just a small change in mass,
Affects the movement of either,
And then what a mess.

Tick tock,
Click clack!
Hearts sync'ed for a moment
And then just not!

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 1, 2005 08:24:36 PM Report
excellent comparisons with life and love and the ticking and tocking of the clock loved it as I knew i would
suberb
Cathy
Comment By: FreeChristina on May 14, 2005 12:47:44 PM Report
Wow! I am impressed, you are an amazing writer. Beautiful write richard!
~Christina
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 4, 2005 09:29:17 PM Report
RICHARD,
THIS IS WONDERFUL.. YOUR THOUGHT PROCESS HERE IS AWESOME ~ SHE
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 29, 2005 05:39:06 PM Report
Wow, you have summed up life and how
love comes and goes in our lives.
Very insightful and the comparisons to
the trains moving down the track is
clever. Linda
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on April 29, 2005 04:54:16 PM Report
LOL! I like this very much. Great write.
samantha.




 


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